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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished

Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 22/07/2020 có chủ đề về Crime: Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Apr 20, 2022
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🚀 Đề bài

Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

😵 Dàn ý

DOL sẽ trình bày quan điểm qua 1 đoạn mở bài (introduction), 2 đoạn thân bài (body paragraph), và 1 đoạn kết bài (conclusion)
  • Mở bài: Sau khi paraphrase lại đề bài, DOL sẽ đưa ra một Thesis Statement (luận điểm) để đưa ra quan điểm của mình về vấn đề này
  • Thân bài:
    • Body 1: Bàn luận về quan điểm đầu tiên
    • Body 2: Bàn luận về quan điểm thứ hai
  • Kết bài: Cuối cùng, DOL sẽ nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của mình.
Insert Statement here...
Parents should not be personally liable to the wrongdoing of their children
Insert Paragraph Title Here...
Body paragraph 1:
Topic Sentence
Parents should be punished
Idea 1
Children have not fully developed their mental faculties
    viết, hoặc bấm enter để thêm bullet point
  • Children copy from parents → parents should be blamed
    • viết, hoặc bấm enter để thêm bullet point
  • For example: children growing up in abusive households are more likely to grow up having psychological issues of their own.
Insert Paragraph Title Here...
Body paragraph 2:
Topic Sentence
Children should be punished
Idea 1
They have free will
    viết, hoặc bấm enter để thêm bullet point
  • Individuals also have a degree of autonomy (this of course by age; a four-year-old does not have the same level of cognition as a seventeen-year-old)
Idea 2
To convict parents of crimes their children commit would be to indict them on acts they simply have not done
    viết, hoặc bấm enter để thêm bullet point
  • A child was raised perfectly well, and still decided to become a criminal.

📝 Bài mẫu

Insert paragraph here...
When children
commit crime
, many believe that they themselves should be punished, where there are those who argue that the parents of the children should
face legal justice
instead. In my opinion, parents should not be personally liable to the wrongdoing of their children, since they themselves have not committed a crime, and cannot therefore be responsible.
Insert paragraph here...
Some may argue that since children
have not fully developed their mental faculties
, that behaviours performed by them must be copied from their parents. Therefore, parents that teach their kids
anti social behaviour
therefore
shoulder some of the blame
for their child misbehaving. Studies have shown that children
growing up in abusive households
, for example, are more likely to grow up having psychological issues of their own. Thus, it might be suggested that since children’s cognitive functions are moulded by their parents, they should be punished instead of the child.
Insert paragraph here...
On the other hand, to punish the parents of children implies that the child has no free will. Although parenting does play a part in individual action, it must be pointed out that individuals also
have a degree of autonomy
(this of course by age; a four year old does not
have the same level of cognition
as a seventeen year old). Furthermore, to convict parents of crimes their children commit would be to indict them for acts they simply have not done - it could also be the case that the child was raised perfectly well, and still decided to become a criminal. Therefore, since it cannot be proven that a child’s criminal action is purely because of their parents instead of their own
volition
, their parents should not be punished.
Insert paragraph here...
Overall, I argue that since even children past a certain age have a degree of autonomy, we should not put a legal punishment on parents of criminal children.
Dàn ý
(306 words)

📚 Vocabulary

Học hỏi thêm những từ vựng bổ ích được sử dụng trong bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 ở trên.
Commit crime
/kəˈmɪt kraɪm/
(verb). Phạm tội
When children commit crime, many believe that they themselves should be punished.
vocab
To be punished
/tuː biː ˈpʌnɪʃt/
(verb). Bị phạt, trừng trị
The boy was punished for lying.
vocab
Face legal justice
/feɪs ˈliːgəl ˈʤʌstɪs/
(verb). Đối diện với công bằng pháp lý
The parents of the children should face legal justice when their children commit crime.
vocab
To be liable to the wrongdoing of their children
/tuː biː ˈlaɪəbl tuː ðə ˈrɒŋˈdu(ː)ɪŋ ɒv ðeə ˈʧɪldrən/
(adj). Chịu trách nhiệm pháp lý với những việc làm sai trái của trẻ
Parents should not be personally liable to the wrongdoing of their children.
Have not fully developed their mental faculties
/hæv nɒt ˈfʊli dɪˈvɛləpt ðeə ˈmɛntl ˈfækəltiz/
(verb). Vẫn chưa hoàn thiện khả năng tư duy
Young children have not fully developed their mental faculties.
Copy from their parents
/ˈkɒpi frɒm ðeə ˈpeərənts/
(verb). Bắt chước bố mẹ
Children often learn from copying from their parents.
vocab
Anti social behaviour
/ˈænti ˈsəʊʃəl bɪˈheɪvjə/
(noun). Hành vi/thái độ chống đối xã hội
Many young people nowadays tend to exhibit anti social behaviours.
vocab
Shoulder some of the blame
/ˈʃəʊldə sʌm ɒv ðə bleɪm/
(verb). Chịu một phần trách nhiệm
Parents that teach their kids anti social behaviour therefore shoulder some of the blame for their child misbehaving.
Misbehave
/ˌmɪsbɪˈheɪv/
(verb). Cư xử sai/sai phạm
Good parental education helps lower the chances of children misbehaving.
vocab
Grow up in abusive households
/grəʊ ʌp ɪn əˈbjuːsɪv ˈhaʊshəʊldz/
(verb). Lớn lên trong các gia đình bạo lực
Children growing up in an abusive households are more likely to suffer from mental issues.
vocab
Have psychological issues
/hæv ˌsaɪkəˈlɒʤɪkəl ˈɪʃuːz/
(verb). Có vấn đề tâm lý
The boy has suffered from psychological issues upon his parents' divorce.
vocab
Have a degree of autonomy
/hæv ə dɪˈgriː ɒv ɔːˈtɒnəmi/
(verb). Có một mức độ tự chủ nhất định
Individuals also have a degree of autonomy.
vocab
Have the same level of cognition
/hæv ðə seɪm ˈlɛvl ɒv kɒgˈnɪʃən/
(verb). Có khả năng nhận thức tương tự
A four year old does not have the same level of cognition as a seventeen year old.
Convict sb of sth
/ˈkɒnvɪkt sb ɒv sth/
(verb). Buộc tội ai đó vì điều gì
He has twice been convicted of robbery.
vocab
Indict them for acts they have not done
/ɪnˈdaɪt ðɛm fɔr ækts ðeɪ hæv nɒt dʌn/
(verb). Buộc tội họ vì những gì họ không làm
To convict parents of crimes their children commit would be to indict them for acts they simply have not done.
vocab
Volition
/vəʊˈlɪʃən/
(noun). Ý muốn
It cannot be proven that a child’s criminal action is purely because of their parents instead of their own volition.
vocab

✨ Bài tập Exercise

Mình cùng làm 2 bài tập sau để ôn lại các từ vựng cũng như cấu trúc hay đã được dùng trong bài IELTS Writing Sample nhé!

Exercise 1:


Khi trẻ em phạm tội, nhiều người tin rằng chúng nên bị trừng phạt.
=> When children

, many believe that they themselves should be punished.

Phụ huynh không nên chịu trách nhiệm pháp lý với những việc làm sai trái của trẻ.
=> Parents should not be personally

.

Trẻ nhỏ thì vẫn chưa hoàn toàn phát triển khả năng tư duy.
=> Young children have not

.

Trẻ em thường học từ việc bắt chước bố mẹ.
=> Children often learn from

.

Trẻ em lớn lên trong các gia đình bạo thực thường gặp nhiều vấn đề về tâm lý hơn.
=> Children

are more likely to suffer from mental issues.

Mỗi cá nhân có một mức độ tự chủ nhất định.
=> Individuals also

.

Một đứa trẻ 4 tuổi thường không có khả năng nhận thức giống với đứa trẻ 7 tuổi.
=> A four year old does not

as a seventeen year old.

Buộc tội phụ huynh vì sai phạm của con họ có nghĩa là buộc tội họ vì những gì họ không làm.
=> To convict parents of crimes their children commit would be to

.
fully developed their mental faculties
commit crime
growing up in an abusive households
liable to the wrongdoing of their children
indict them for acts they simply have not done
copying from their parents
have a degree of autonomy
have the same level of cognition








Exercise 2:
Which is the right expression for 'Hành vi/thái độ chống đối xã hội'?
______ some of the blame (Chịu một phần trách nhiệm)
Which is the correct expression for 'Có vấn đề tâm lý'?
Convict somebody ___ something (Buộc tội ai đó vì điều gì)
What is the correct expression for 'Ý muốn'?

💡 Lời kết

Tới đây là hết rồi smiley5 Sau sample "Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion", DOL mong các bạn không chỉ nắm được cách trả lời hiệu quả cho một bài Writing task 2 dạng Discuss both views mà còn có thể bó túi được một vài từ vựng, cấu trúc hay của chủ đề Crime.
Nếu có thời gian thì nhớ làm phần bài tập và tự mình viết một bài khác nha vì 'Practice makes perfect' mà nhỉ smiley26
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